tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post3814041464968638915..comments2023-07-05T15:52:36.029+03:00Comments on Laptop Diary: Waiting At My DoorstepMohammed Musthafahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-55767588652359814352009-06-15T10:06:37.202+03:002009-06-15T10:06:37.202+03:00I guess this is the best poem yet...its true...dif...I guess this is the best poem yet...its true...difficult is how u get back to the start...i loved the poem!...keep ryting more!!Meghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06438163703099308421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-47379985998767990692009-02-26T11:06:00.000+03:002009-02-26T11:06:00.000+03:00Oh :( What a lovely piece…*sob*……*sob*Oh :( What a lovely piece…*sob*……<BR/><BR/>*sob*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-24835210972002442282009-02-18T07:58:00.000+03:002009-02-18T07:58:00.000+03:00I really like this poem. It sounds much better whe...I really like this poem. It sounds much better when sung or just recited.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985268676317106392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-3830144423121477962009-02-18T07:49:00.000+03:002009-02-18T07:49:00.000+03:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985268676317106392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-89901989169547662182009-01-17T14:35:00.000+03:002009-01-17T14:35:00.000+03:00Hey Mustafa, maybe not your best.But still it's go...Hey Mustafa, maybe not your best.But still it's got genuine feelings and emotions. Try to use a rhyme scheme too if possible, but not compulsorily.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985268676317106392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-71041673448351677152008-12-30T16:41:00.000+03:002008-12-30T16:41:00.000+03:00@Aersh: Nah, it's not me...thankfully...something ...@Aersh: Nah, it's not me...thankfully...something happened which inspired me to write this, thts all..yah, i agree, sometimes its like i'm writing for the sake of rhyming!<BR/><BR/>@Neil: I agree with u...definitely not my best...i'll continue though....!Mohammed Musthafahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-10085955195792879732008-12-29T21:23:00.000+03:002008-12-29T21:23:00.000+03:00err...definately not ur best dude..! but still nic...err...definately not ur best dude..! but still nice to read a poem of urs after a long time...liked the ending..<BR/><BR/>plzz continue with poems though...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-73429348602500302962008-12-29T14:48:00.000+03:002008-12-29T14:48:00.000+03:00hey.... is this narrator by any chance named Moham...hey.... is this narrator by any chance named Mohammed Musthafa Azeez???? <BR/><BR/>I once did the same thing when my friend got angry... check it at...<BR/> http://writingonthesands.blogspot.com/2008/10/im-waiting.html<BR/><BR/>And being critical about it....it was good, not great. I loved the use of small facts like the telephone... jus a bit of advice... poems need not rhyme... sometimes it Aershhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08984501851548576585noreply@blogger.com