tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post6908579734482687705..comments2023-07-05T15:52:36.029+03:00Comments on Laptop Diary: My Card HouseMohammed Musthafahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-50297314165325449842009-10-15T08:45:47.079+03:002009-10-15T08:45:47.079+03:00You have done a great job. Its very beautiful poem...You have done a great job. Its very beautiful poem. Best of luck for you novel. Good job keep it up.House Design Sydneyhttp://www.peterdownes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-1749031226651770502009-08-06T07:53:28.665+03:002009-08-06T07:53:28.665+03:00Wow... I am amazed ... Good work!Wow... I am amazed ... Good work!Neethunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-91876205471308337852009-07-20T13:57:20.584+03:002009-07-20T13:57:20.584+03:00tip top..!!tip top..!!Shahbaznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-74247346951808602152009-06-27T11:53:35.142+03:002009-06-27T11:53:35.142+03:00wonderful muthu!
These top cards reflect our prior...wonderful muthu!<br />These top cards reflect our priorities ...we just have to handle them carefully!shamailnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-87077030650344994852009-06-16T22:25:20.102+03:002009-06-16T22:25:20.102+03:00nice poem btw...learn frm mistakes made!nice poem btw...learn frm mistakes made!blossomnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-58089452540241148372009-06-16T22:24:25.873+03:002009-06-16T22:24:25.873+03:00a god suggestion if u can take it....next tym wen ...a god suggestion if u can take it....next tym wen u put a card in the top position..make sure it stays ther...evn if u want 2 shift its position a little down, u gotta do it slowlly, to avoid its collapse...take tym n patience...dont hurt the card n then try to save it...blossomnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-37258570829376496512009-06-16T12:36:35.150+03:002009-06-16T12:36:35.150+03:00well....well done again...as all said....i feel it...well....well done again...as all said....i feel it reflects ur lyf.....but a small advice....or take it as a segeestion ....well...maybe the cards say they dnt want to cum bak.....but deep inside they really want to....keep it up....nd keep writinVarsha Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384101028822249614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-28082607476562495482009-06-15T16:50:59.960+03:002009-06-15T16:50:59.960+03:00@Rejin - Thanks dude. Writing poems is really toug...@Rejin - Thanks dude. Writing poems is really tough, that's why I prefer the normal posts. As for the meaning, right on...almost.<br /><br />@Anonymous - Thanks....still, try not to stay Anonymous k?<br /><br />@Zardy - Man, you're interpretation is excatly what I had in mind. Actually, it's better than what I could've expressed!<br /><br />@Lakshmi - Thanks! Yup, some really Mohammed Musthafahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-11820697528806407992009-06-15T15:38:18.268+03:002009-06-15T15:38:18.268+03:00dude u shud really write more poems ....its awesom...dude u shud really write more poems ....its awesome<br /><br />Interpretation:<br />The house of cards is like ur life..u built it slowly by taking in a lot of ppl...bt u gave undue importance to sum of them hum u thot were very hifi person...n u gave no importance to sum ppl hum u thot r cheapos..bt as you kept on going lyk dat... had to choose the most important out of the important ppls,which Rockyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00884225457969257414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-66780640349658882872009-06-15T11:46:23.101+03:002009-06-15T11:46:23.101+03:00dude.....an awesum poem.......man 2 b frank, i sta...dude.....an awesum poem.......man 2 b frank, i started havin a deep interest 2 poems after readin many of ur poems....mayb a few of dem! ;)<br /><br />the only interpretation i can think of after readin is tht, its a complete reflection of ur life....beautifully written n i hope more n more ppl understand it......<br /><br />juz rememba 1 thin dude......ppl commit mistakes, 'cus v humans r NaseeFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08631422245395651215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-74962522248160174682009-06-15T08:38:31.969+03:002009-06-15T08:38:31.969+03:00I'll be honest here. the poem was deep. and me...I'll be honest here. the poem was deep. and meaningful. <br /><br />BUT <br /><br />the language was all so kiddish that it seemed as if it had been written by a child. grow up dude. u don hafta force your poems to rhyme. sometimes it jus goes well even without rhyming<br /><br />as per the meaning i interpret it as how any step in our life, if not taken from our heart can spoil it. also it&#Aershhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08984501851548576585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-17482738538285396632009-06-15T06:53:10.317+03:002009-06-15T06:53:10.317+03:00its better than the rough write.
Its deep , better...its better than the rough write.<br />Its deep , better than expected and yes it makes you stop and think. <br />well,thats the point isn't it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-59066565883495402712009-06-15T05:53:34.499+03:002009-06-15T05:53:34.499+03:00Its a beautiful poem, all the very best for your n...Its a beautiful poem, all the very best for your novel, I am sure you'd do a great job (Inshallah)All the very best to you!A New Beginninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07292758705734074064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-36945930982995849542009-06-14T23:42:20.597+03:002009-06-14T23:42:20.597+03:00That was a clever poem! It is really nice! My inte...That was a clever poem! It is really nice! My interpretation is that it reflects alot on your life....you reveal the meaning! But what I leanrt from the end of teh poem that you can build a card house once again....only thing is taht dont make teh mistake you made before....dont take all teh cards-they wil ultimately stumble down...take a few...just enough to make a card house so that you wont swatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06337774521640313435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-76425656988008404212009-06-14T22:02:27.445+03:002009-06-14T22:02:27.445+03:00Wow, you'r so clever and have so many clever f...Wow, you'r so clever and have so many clever frds too! I liked "Zardy's" interpretation...i think its true. When you try to pick favorites among friends, you might end up breaking someone's heart, and when you break it, all the years of fun, happiness and sharing seems to go to naught. beautiful post...made me think!Lakshmi Bharadwajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03212991591359341995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-75995227980079298352009-06-14T21:42:57.631+03:002009-06-14T21:42:57.631+03:00Here's my interpretation. I don't take muc...Here's my interpretation. I don't take much time to think, but I jump to conclusions.<br /><br />This card house you built over years represents your friendship. It took you years to build it. When it comes to friendship, a dilemma we all come under(especially during the irrational period of teenage) is to decide which friend is most special to us. And when you don't do that carefullyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985268676317106392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-31581439545944675912009-06-14T21:24:21.559+03:002009-06-14T21:24:21.559+03:00There are two kinds of writers: those that make yo...There are two kinds of writers: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder.<br /><br />U belong to both the Category!!<br /><br />Amazing....Keep up the good work!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-7179102750507305702009-06-14T20:02:20.983+03:002009-06-14T20:02:20.983+03:00WOW..awesome poem man...i told you u should do mor...WOW..awesome poem man...i told you u should do more of this!<br />wat i could understand of the poem is that we have dreams...we build on them for years...then we have to make a choice between two paths ..we choose one..and if it turns out wrong..the entire dream is shatterd...atleast thts wat i could interpret..<br />amazing poem man..and ur rhyming..u just didnt try to rhyme for the the sake ofRejinnoreply@blogger.com