tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post7326034890029806344..comments2023-07-05T15:52:36.029+03:00Comments on Laptop Diary: Taking For GrantedMohammed Musthafahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-70871372897804756122010-07-20T22:12:24.702+03:002010-07-20T22:12:24.702+03:00It was very average for me. I loved your 'Hand...It was very average for me. I loved your 'Handful of Olives', but this did not work. <br /><br />She walked with a grace that none of her classmates could ever possess.<br /><br />-- Show ; don't tell. <br /><br />She was Andrew best friend, the love of his life. They spent the past two years chatting, until they reached a point where neither of them could deny how they felt about Peacehttp://www.google.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-62425792799791562772009-12-24T23:07:18.554+03:002009-12-24T23:07:18.554+03:00I give it 4 stars. Good job!I give it 4 stars. Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07985268676317106392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-75481592438966586612009-12-17T21:35:39.456+03:002009-12-17T21:35:39.456+03:00StakeSauuce!!
A1!!!
legendarrryy..!!
classic..awes...StakeSauuce!!<br />A1!!!<br />legendarrryy..!!<br />classic..awesome..:D<br />and im outta words...:D<br />keep it cummin..:DSemi Charmed Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04671213959037212422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-60865096436737873162009-12-12T15:36:20.413+03:002009-12-12T15:36:20.413+03:00a very good one!a very good one!Varshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02671885491257432354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-83449088162113062682009-12-11T21:04:10.947+03:002009-12-11T21:04:10.947+03:00U have a great talent for coming up with good plot...U have a great talent for coming up with good plots .... but u tend to be a bit careless while putting it in words.... The story is good, but do review ur work for any errors before posting it.......nahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08440519710389232344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-1146909540592401112009-12-11T12:32:20.085+03:002009-12-11T12:32:20.085+03:00wow...its beautiful musthafawow...its beautiful musthafaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10995832860153504474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-25727081579435087182009-12-11T12:24:07.673+03:002009-12-11T12:24:07.673+03:00This was totally mindblowing...
i mean the way it ...This was totally mindblowing...<br />i mean the way it started...its jus so real u knw...the things tht happens btw a girl nd a guy...lol...nd the ending...i actually thot sumthing else was goin on all along nd then as usual...u hadd to bring the twist in the end...that was the best part....TOTALLY LOVED IT re......Keep them cumin muhtu...cooz v r waiting!!....one of ur best short stories i Varsha Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384101028822249614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-89623619469791849502009-12-11T11:59:09.836+03:002009-12-11T11:59:09.836+03:00Dude I'm just sick of complimenting you man! S...Dude I'm just sick of complimenting you man! Screw you :P<br />Tooo good !!<br />Loved the ending, and the title!<br />But a few mistakes here n there; read it again and you'll find them out!<br />Cheers!:DRejinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-48026842223675516762009-12-11T11:47:43.404+03:002009-12-11T11:47:43.404+03:00intriguing....this one was really reallly good...e...intriguing....this one was really reallly good...excellent job..original..and it leaves u like "wow..i din expect tht!!"..:)..keep it up..:D..chethnanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-7521603380297629822009-12-11T11:35:50.475+03:002009-12-11T11:35:50.475+03:00you really have a tallent for writing :)
this was...you really have a tallent for writing :)<br /><br />this was a very nice fiction :D<br />caught me by surprise, it did :D:D<br /><br />but i still have a question....<br />'what did Rebecca want to tell him??'Internhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12129065728557908848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-2408680705224090962009-12-11T08:55:19.667+03:002009-12-11T08:55:19.667+03:00this is a very welcome change from your usual post...this is a very welcome change from your usual posts...but i noticed a few grammatical mistakes,so i'd urge you to be extra vigilant on that front,because one of the signs of a good writer is his command over the language,and since i think you have the potential to be a great writer, even minor bloopers are strict no-no on this blog..<br />loved the twist...looking forward to more such namiyanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-37246969543794957802009-12-11T05:52:15.042+03:002009-12-11T05:52:15.042+03:00All I can say is you are extremely talented, you&#...All I can say is you are extremely talented, you'd surely go places :)<br />All the Best!A New Beginninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07292758705734074064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-58361036658387016192009-12-11T01:23:29.118+03:002009-12-11T01:23:29.118+03:00hahaha! I would call this total awsomeness!!...I t...hahaha! I would call this total awsomeness!!...I took for granted that this would be another philosophical story...but as usual, u shocked me again ...:D..yes you're right..this is d best post so far...!..loved it:DMeghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06438163703099308421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6638528300266955615.post-38373665992084341272009-12-11T00:07:42.860+03:002009-12-11T00:07:42.860+03:00This one is GREAT Musthafa! There is simply no lim...This one is GREAT Musthafa! There is simply no limit to how good u can get at this!..I totally loved it..I was almost crying mid-way..it was the perfect selection of words to convey what you had to..the end totally blew me apart! :D Simply too good :D Loved it! :)Sanjananoreply@blogger.com